tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7368865201013975992.post1775798073939834658..comments2023-07-03T21:36:45.805+12:00Comments on Merryn: Riccarton HouseBlog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04956257227880009533noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7368865201013975992.post-81676606623672075042016-08-25T09:19:21.919+12:002016-08-25T09:19:21.919+12:00Ni Hao My Name Is Jazmine From Mamaku 2 At Greymai...Ni Hao My Name Is Jazmine From Mamaku 2 At Greymain School. I Like The Way You Have Capital Letters In You Sentence And I Like The Way You Said. I slowly walk to the kitchen I was as slow as a turtle to make some yummy food. As I slowly walk into the kitchen I can hear the floor creak it is as creepy as someone stalking you. This Is Such A Good Sentence You Said I Walk up stairs to get the nanny to look after the kids the stairs are as steep as a hill.The nanny looked after the kids while I cooked tea for 14 people counting me and the nanny. It Has A Lot Of Detail In it Like I Mean A Lot Of Detail And The Way You Said The bed was as comfortable as a couch.Then I went to sleep Very quickly.I woke up the the next day from the birds singing and babies crying.The bird's voice was as pretty as a diamond.<br />Next Time I Think You Could Of Made Your Sentences A Little Bit Bigger And Longer But I Don't Think You Need To Work On You expression In The Sentences Jazminehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11189008077675431693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7368865201013975992.post-57792712023757026962016-08-15T09:38:13.949+12:002016-08-15T09:38:13.949+12:00Hi my name is Kash. I like your story it has a lot...Hi my name is Kash. I like your story it has a lot of capital letters for a second I thought it was real. Maybe next time you could remember to use full stops at the end of your sentence.Kash https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781769442443998173noreply@blogger.com