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Thursday, April 13, 2017

Beyond the lines


WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers.



As me and my friends were on the ship to go to war we all huddled up so we could keep warm and because there wasn't much room. When we arrived at the beach we saw the Turkish people waiting for us to arrive. I walked down the ramp and ran into a puddle. The Turkish people had put barbed wire on the ground so we could get cut.

The Turkish people had bombs so did we, they had helicopters but we didn't have any. They were dropping bombs and we had to keep on running. We were running as fast as a race car. I didn't like it because I had to see all my mates get shot and there were people getting shot in there cheek and I could smell the blood.


I hide behind a pile of dirt then BOOM It gives me a fright. I look behind me and then another man gets killed. I take a deep breath and keep on running.

Friday, April 7, 2017

The cloud

WALT Write a narrative


The cloud


I was made by a scientist to help people and make sure everyone is ok. We also set up lots of cameras inside me so the scientist could control me. He had cameras all around the wall so he could see to. He let me out the window so  he could see if I work.




I worked fine so off I went I could go through windows,in the middle of buildings, down roads, and watch people. There was a fire down a street and put it out with my rain. I made dogs bark at night .



I could travel all over the world my favorite place to go to is New Zealand. I like to visit the sky tower and rainbows end and other places.



I could also see my scientist to and I saw him disconnect all the cameras for me to see and for him. So it was pitch black all I could see was black, so I made problems. I was making lightning and making floods. My scientist tracked me down and put a potion on me a poof I'm gone .

Thursday, March 16, 2017

Something fishy

      Walt use correct punctuation

                     Something fishy



I was sitting in the laundry mat when I saw a blue shine coming from a washing machine. I wanted to have a look, I walked over and put my hand in the washing machine then took a big breath and put my face in the water. Suddenly it took me into a magical world with socks that were fish tops that were squids and more fish that were socks and beanies that were turtles. The fish were all glowing and I could barely see anything because the water was so soapy. I was feeling happy because I got to hold one but it swam away fast.There was lots of coins on the ground from people's pockets that were left there.


Then a massive shark came at me to eat me it had big shark teeth and had a  button for his nose. He came closer and closer to me he really wanted to eat me. I hid behind a skinny tall tree but he still tried to eat me. I swam and swam until he almost took a foot of me I swam and swam until I got tired I really needed a break. I looked up and saw light in front of me I said “yay” and I thought why did I do that.




Anyway I got to the end and I flopped out of the machine so did the jeans. I was so scared of them I slowly went to put my finger on the jeans until I heard a noise saying “I believe those are mine” I looked up feeling really embarrassed. The end

The lighthouse keepers lunch

WALT research a book

My DLO

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                      We are learning to solve addition and subtraction problems by using groupings with 5.

Tuesday, March 7, 2017

Te reo māori 2017

Kia ora whanau 
This is my collectionof whakatauki and what they mean. 

I hope you enjoy reading this I will be adding a new slide every week.