100 word challenge

Gaint cup

My family and I decided to go to a forest far, far away. It was a little bit scary. At the forest as we were walking I saw a white, giant cup. In the cup is gold, shiny designs that look like leaves that fall off trees in Autumn. There was also a gold line on the inside with a little line beside it and on the handle was a little bit of gold. On the outside were two lines of gold. I was really confused when I saw the cup in the ground I wonder how it got there?

100 word challenge

This week we were given a story starter but what if I was in charge? My focus was on making my story interesting and staying within 100 word limit.

….If I was in charge….
 My Sister and I were on our way to KMart to get me some new clothing . We arrived and walked into the shop we walked over to the clothing section but there was no clothing. My sister said “lets go and get a chocolate bar instead.” So we went to get a chocolate bar and they were all out of chocolate bars. I was thinking of something else we needed I thought of hair ties but they were all out of hair ties. If I was in charge of KMart I would make sure there were lots of chocolate bars, lots of girls clothes and lots of hair ties.

My learning goals for 2018

Today I brainstormed a new goal for panui pukapuka, tuhituhi, pangarau, hauora and a key competency goal. I have created a google drawing and I am sharing it on my blog to prepare for our goal setting conversations next week.

Poha to kirihou

This term we have been learning about how food storage has changed through the years.
I have learnt how how bad plastic is to the enviroment and now I know that is is always good to make wax wraps insted❤

storyboard that prihaka

Made with Storyboard That
WALT retell a story using storyboard that!

Newspaper report 1

Crime scene

by Merryn Mokomoko

In Christchurch there has been a terrible crime scene on August the 15 2014. There had been a little 7 year old farm girl running around her farm. She saw a man wearing a black mask she said

“What are you doing here?” he just walked closer and closer and chopped her legs off and threw her legs in a pond nearby and threw her body on the other side of the pond. All you could see was half of her legs and her small black gumboots. Police officers have been trying to investigate but they haven't found any clues!

The piano

       The Piano       

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The Piano

Before you start writing

This video is about a man  who remembers his past and recalls his memories. Think about how he would be feeling and other memories that this might trigger.

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WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

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WALT write a piece  of  writing from the old mans point of view as he recalls his memories.

The Piano

I am a kind old man that is very good at the piano. I know that I am getting old now and I might die soon so I am going back to some of my memories that I can remember. As I am playing the piano I start to remember My wife that past away from cancer 8 years ago. I also start to remember when we went on holiday to Fiji it was lovely there we had a nice time together, we went diving together and found lots of cool shells. I look beside me and I imagine My wife playing the piano next to me. I think of some times like when I went to war and I saw my brother die, It was terrible my own brother was dying in my arms I tried to help him but it was too late. Meanwhile I feel sad and I want to remember some happy times, I remember for my 7th birthday my dad got me my own ride on horse it had a nice fluffy soft mane with eyes that looked like they were real. As soon as I had opened it I new that it was the present I had ever got. Unfortunately my dad past away not that long ago I can remember my dad giving it to me and the big smile he had on his face was a nice way to remember him. Playing and playing the piano I start to remember my mum, she was a lovely old lady she would give me the tightest hugs in the world my face would go bright red. My mother also died it wasn't a disease or anything she just got really sick she couldn't walk and she could barely talk. So we took her to hospital and from there she past away. Luckily I have my grandson to keep me company since I love him so much I handed my ride on horse to my grandson he loves it evan tho it is not like a scooter that they have now it is still the best present ever. I start to remember some more memories like when my grandson was only little and he was just born he was the most lovely thing ever. I also start to remember the day me and my wife got married it was so beautiful we got to go in a limo away for tea we had all our family and friends come we had every sort of lolly for desert  and we had every type of ice cream for dessert and we had really yum stuff for tea I really miss having my wife around but I can suck it up. As I am remembering the wedding I also start to remember the day that my wife died that was heartbreaking I remember being away from her for 2 weeks and then I went to go see her and she wasn't in her room so I asked the people behind the desks. I asked where is my wife they said what is her name I said lucy i'm sorry but she past away last night I burst into tears and walk away. I can't really remember any other things and start to get tired so I stop playing and leave. But I think of one more memory so I jump back on my piano before bed because this is a really good memory it was when I owned a farm with all sorts of animals there were fat ones small tiny ones and big ones lots of them I need to go to bed soon so I stop and go to sleep good night. The end