Creative writing

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given. This week the words were: Pink,Huge,Bridge,Sprinkled and daffodil.

The big week

By Merryn

We decided to go to the park at the park there are beautiful daffodils there is also a Bridge going over a lake. When you get to the end of the bridge there is Pink, gold, yellow, orange, green, glitter sprinkled all over the ground. There is also a row of trees and on the other side there is a huge playground that has 5 things of everything like 5 slides 5 swings 5 seesaws. It is pretty cool and it is free to go to and it is normally packed with people and the good thing is that it's just across the road from us. Anyway it was time to head back home now and have dinner Mcdonalds was for dinner I was really excited. It was really yum. I asked my Mum if my friend Aliyah could come and stay the night she said you have to ask her Mum. So Mum grabbed her phone and rang Aliyah's Mum she said I will be 15 minutes away. In 15 minutes she was here we didn't have much time till bed so we watched a movie. We had to go to bed because it was getting late. We woke up the next morning and had pancakes for breakfast. So we went back to the park and when we were on the tallest slide in the park Aliyah fell to the ground on the concrete and broke her nose. I had my phone and called Mum she said call the ambulance so I called 111. She said 111 what's your emergency I said my friend just fell off a slide and broke her nose. I told her my location and they were her in the next 5 mins. She didn't want to go in the ambulance by herself so I came with her.Her nose was pretty yuck It had blood dripping down. We arrived at the hospital then Aliyahs Mum arrived but I still wanted to stay with her. We went inside a room apparently they were gonna click her nose back in place. “AOOWWW’’ I looked over and her nose was straight I was daydreaming for a bit until I heard her screaming. Me and Aliyah were allowed to go home now which was good. We got home. Aliyah didn't want to go to that park again and I can see why :) she had to go home now and have dinner there was school tomorrow so we had to go to bed at 8:30 and it was 7:00 anyway so she drove to her house when she left I ate my dinner and went to bed. The next morning it was school I woke up at 7:30 I was lucky I didn't sleep in. Aliyah came to school today which was weird I would think that if I broke my nose I wouldn't come to school the next day. Aliyah had a big bandage on her nose how could she breathe. Everyone was asking if she was ok “what happened” “Did it hurt” that's all people have been saying to her ALL DAY. Even the teachers. I feel bad for her Aliyah was relieved the day was over and know more questions were asked until we were walking home everyone else that was walking that hadn't asked her even some people that did ask her “what happen” “does it hurt” “How did that happen” Finally we were home she was at her house and I was at my house. Well that has been a big week for all of us especially Aliyah. The end